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Frank's avatar

Well, Eleanor ran directly into the 'dirty work' experience that every junior supervisor/manager gets tested by. A more senior manager kicks a ugly problem that they don't want to deal with over to their junior...who hasn't yet learned the nuances of people managing. Doubly, maybe triply hard in her case as a young woman managing a man from highly patriarchal society, and an outsider who doesn't understand the social layering in that society. Having a woman directly threaten his job and status was humiliating no doubt.

BTW, the shift to an anonymous third person narrative caught me by surprise in this instance... although I see how it served a purpose of quickly showing that there was a complex interaction at play, which Eleanor doesn't see given the limited experiences in her life at this point.

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Sue Mann's avatar

Yeah - mission accomplished! You the reader are seeing more than Eleanor does ;)

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Sue Mann's avatar

That would be because it was accidentally set to send at 3pm this afternoon instead of the usual 1am this morning. It's there now.

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