Fascinating how the characters, inhabiting the same time & space, can experience such utterly different "realities:" 1. 'Satisfaction with your righteous day's work' and 2. 'Devastation: as the hovering Dementors evacuate your soul and very want to go forward.' I could feel the tension!
This is terrific, Sue! I love that you've created such a powerful story (so far, from this snippet) culled from your own imagination, life and professional experiences, and blended with creative and real-world inspiration. Your book feels very timely and moving! I'm following along on your author's journey...
Tremendous read. The complexity and messiness of life are brilliantly portrayed in two characters who, while going through a shared experience, have completely different experiences. I can’t wait to read more from this talented author!
Fascinating how the characters, inhabiting the same time & space, can experience such utterly different "realities:" 1. 'Satisfaction with your righteous day's work' and 2. 'Devastation: as the hovering Dementors evacuate your soul and very want to go forward.' I could feel the tension!
This is terrific, Sue! I love that you've created such a powerful story (so far, from this snippet) culled from your own imagination, life and professional experiences, and blended with creative and real-world inspiration. Your book feels very timely and moving! I'm following along on your author's journey...
So powerful and heartbreaking
Tremendous read. The complexity and messiness of life are brilliantly portrayed in two characters who, while going through a shared experience, have completely different experiences. I can’t wait to read more from this talented author!
First chapter was so moving. Can't wait for the kindle version.
Wow! So well written and grabs your attention. I am excited to read more!
Excellent beginning. I like the rhythm 🎶 of your writing. ✍️
Whoa. Off to a strong start. Liked the contrast between viewpoints.